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Thursday, June 20, 2019

The King Of Winter

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  1. EunizeJune 20, 2019 at 2:17 PM

    Hi Kezia,
    I really like the way you added lots of adjectives.
    Maybe next time you could add more similes but this great writing.
    Nice job

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    1. KeziaJuly 25, 2019 at 9:49 AM

      Thank you,
      And next time I WILL use similes

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