NIA
Known for its feathers and wings and legs, The chicken lays eggs and eggs and eggs! Known for the comb atop its crown, The chicken lays eggs of white and brown. Known for its strut when taking a walk, The chicken lays eggs! Ba-a-awk! Ba-a-awk!
AnC
There are more chickens on earth than people – 25 billion.
Chickens can remember over 100 different faces of people or animals.
A mother hen turns her eggs about 50 times per day, and can lay more than 300 eggs per year.
A mother hen turns her eggs about 50 times per day, and can lay more than 300 eggs per year.
The record number of eggs laid by a chicken in one day is 7.
As chickens grow older, they lay larger eggs, but fewer than when they’re younger.
EAI would rate this text 6/10. I like how they said “Everything was in slow motion” Because it shows an image in my mind. I just didn't like how they didn't say the boys name. Instead of saying his name they said “Me!”
NIC
Everything was in slow motion. Dad and uncle Harold froze, unable to believe what was happening. Safe on the bank, we all watched the tree crashing through the undergrowth, falling in the direction of the neighbours house. All of a sudden there was a…THUD ! The tree fell on the neighbours house but that wasn't the only thing that happened Dad fainted on the ground think how he will fix the house back. Just then Dad stood up and said “The neighbours will come in tw-” “THE NEIGHBOURS ARE HERE!” Said a gruff voice
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