Hey guys,
Today i a going to show you my reading create task. My animal is a tiger! So here are 10 facts about Tigers! I also changed the background to tigers habitats cause Mrs.Lee told me that seals dont live on wires, or do they? Anyway lets go!
Please could you tell me want I need to improve on!
Thanks,
Kezia
Friday, May 29, 2020
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hi kezia im Aiden good work i liked your facts about tigers good details its really better then mine
ReplyDeleteHi aiden,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog post! Instead of saying its better then mine, you should try more harder!
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Kezia
Hi Kezia,
ReplyDeleteWell done on creating a beautiful and factual slideshow on tigers. Extra points for taking on board my feedback from your 'Seals' slideshow and choosing a more relevant background for this one! Your slides were laid out clearly and I liked the extra picture inserts - it is like a magazine about tigers! One thing you could think about is having larger text, or finding a way to make it stand out. I had some trouble reading a few words because the words blended in with the background.
Ka pai! I look forward to seeing your next 'Create' task!
Hi Mrs Lee!
DeleteI know this comment is a bit late but, thanks for commenting on my blog! I hope you see my poster on how to save coral reefs!
I cant wait to see you tomorrow! Are you going to wear something from Korea?